Cars

There are too many people using cars to get places that are too close. In my opinion, people should walk or bike and other stuff except cars. Here is an example. Some people drive two streets to get somewhere when they could walk.
That would help by saving money but if you didn’t, you might not be able to pay your fees or you might not be able to buy food for your children. You might not even be able to pay your electrician’s bill. If you walked you would save lots f money.

If you’re driving now you are polluting our air. It’s killing animals. I know that some of my friends have asthma and I don’t want them to die just because you’re polluting. Do you want our population to go down in animals and people?
So if you pollute - think again! Or if you use the car – think again! Save us. Don’t pollute because you’re not the only one here!

School Uniforms

Children shouldn’t have to wear a uniform to school in my opinion because you have to go to the difficulty and expense of buying them when you already have clothes.
If you get dirty you need a second uniform to change into and if you get that one dirty, you have to wear plain clothes and the teacher might send you to detention.
Teachers would find it hard to keep track of everyone because they would all look the same. You could get away with more tricks because teachers wouldn’t know who did it. If you went on school trips and you had a naughty buddy, you could swap without the teacher knowing. Other people could get told off if you pulled pranks. If somebody was being naughty on a trip in public, people would think that everyone in that school was naughty.
So, I think kids shouldn’t have to wear a uniform because it’s expensive, hard to keep up with the cleaning and hard to tell everyone apart.

Crazy Computers

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion there should be a longer computer so more people can use it at once. There would be no fighting over the computer so the computer would not get broken The longer computers should be 5 metres long at the price of $2000. You should be able to set a time for doing homework and it sets off an alarm. It will be so much handier for kids. I think kids should get longer computers.